Sorry I forget it !
In a little city, there lived a grand father named Josh and his wife named Clara. In this morning, they want to go to Kuta Beach together. They were packing for their holiday. Clothes, foods, medicines were prepared and no one they forget.After they have breakfast, his wife was cleaning the kitchen and Josh out the car from garage. In the garage, he went to the car and want to open the door of car but he could not. He was forgot if the car was locked, He was finding the key on the table as usual he put. But, there was not the key. He was searching and searching that key. His pocket, suitcase and he around his house too but he could not find that key.
His wife asked to Josh “Hay Josh, what are you finding for? Hurry up, please!”
“Wait a minute. I am finding the key. I have to concentrate to find it.” Said Josh
Josh was still finding that key. He was tired and sitted on the sofa. He was thinking where the key was. He was trying to remember what happened before he went to the garage. Maybe, he forgot something.
“Oh Josh, actually what are you finding for?” Asked Clara to Josh and came closer to him.
“Hem Clara, since 15 minutes ago I have found our car’s key but I did not found it.” Asked Josh
“The key? Hay, did you see it on your hand? It’s the key.”
“Oh God. I already hold it. I’ m sorry Clara. You know me? I am too old and usually forget something. “
Text Analyzing :
Orientation : Josh and Clara would go to the Kuta beach
Event 1 : Josh lost the car’s key
Twist : He realized that he has been held the key
The Shift Door
In a little village at a small hut, there lived a poor family. There were Mr and Mrs Albert. Mr Albert was a gardener and his wife just a housewife.
One day their lived completely changed. It started from, when Mr Joni was died and he had no family. So, in his inheritance he gave all of his riches to Mr Albert and his wife.
Then, Mr and Mrs Albert were moved in a big city and they bought a new house. Arrived their new house, Mr. Albert would opened the door’s house. But, the door couldn’t opened. He trying and trying to opened it.
When they were almost hopeless, their neighbor, Mrs. Rahmi saw and came closer to them.
“Excuse me. Can I help you?” Asked Ms Rahmi
“Yes. We can’t open the door. By the way, how to open it?” Said Mr Albert
“Oh wait. This door is not push, but you must shift it.”
“Oh like that. Thank you very much.” Said Mrs Albert
Then they laughed with it, Mr Albert just didn’t know how to opened the door.
Text analyzing
Orientation : Mr and Mrs Albert were a poor family
Event 1 : Mr Joni was died and gave all of his riches to Mr Albert and his wife
Event 2 : They were moved in a big city and bought a new house
Event 3 : They could not opened the door
Twist : Actually, the door have to shifted
A Silly Girl
Jane was a renowned and leading trendsetter in the capital city. Her fans also followed her fashion. One day, Jane’s best friend, Dave would celebrate his birthday at a hotel and invited his friends and also a few colleagues of the entrepreneur. Jane became one of the honor guests that will be invited. She was so busy to finding the dress for attended Dave’s birthday party.
Then, Jane went to a famous boutique subscription. At the boutique, she saw a beautiful dress. But, that dress was the target of others who came first to the boutique. They were jostling to get that dress. Then, as expected the dress fell into Jane’s hand.
Few days later, Jane had prepared everything carefully. She dressed up for 3 hours to make it all perfect. At 7 pm, Jane arrived at the hotel using limousine. She got off from the car and her bodyguard opened the door for her. She walked along the beautiful red carpet gracefully. Suddenly, Jane saw a man which was so handsome and charming. The man gave her a smile. Jane was so enchanted by him.
Then Braakkkkkkkk! Her face hit an invisible glass door in front of her. So, she fell down with a supine position on the floor and her dress was torn. The accident brought her to tears and she was very shamed. She just realized that the man didn’t smile to her but a girl right next to her.
Text analyzing
Orientation : Jane was a renowned and leading trendsetter in the capital.
Event 1 : Jane invited to attend Dave’s birthday
Event 2 : Jane went to a boutique to finding a beautiful dress
Event 3 : Jane was so enchanted because his smile
Twist : Jane hit an invisible glass door and make her dress was torn
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