Kamis, 12 April 2012

I Still Believe in You - Cliff Richard

A Rose
            1994, Ambon. There lived a little girl named Clara with his parents. At first, they lived in secure and peace. Perfect indeed, like a story in the fairy tales that tell how happy a family that lived in a palace, with great elegance and affection that she got. But several years later when Clara was three years old, her dad that he loved left Clara and her mom. Defeat in inter-tribal warfare that claimed the lives of her dad. Since that time, because her mother did not work and over time their property has been exhausted. They also fall into poverty. Moving from one place to another place and Clara’s mom worked as a maid.
            Until one day, in a small town there is a couple who are very generous. With their cold hands, Clara’s mom got an offer to work as a maid and Clara and her mom was allowed to stay in their homes. Hearing this, they are very happy and accepted their offer. And until their home, it’s luxurious, with a big garden and it’s building like euro models. Actually, that couple had a little boy. His age was not much different from Clara. Cliff named.
            Day after day, Cliff and Clara had passed. Playing, learning together. They were like brother and sister, protect each other. The years, they have been teenagers. They were at the same senior high school, demand that Cliff actually want to be with Clara.
            2012, Bandung. Eight teen years they have been stepped on. Cliff has been awarded a scholarship at a top university medical school at Adelai, while Clara. She decided not to continue her school, she had better work to help her mother who was not healthy as ever. Clif’s dad and mom and also Cliff decided to settle there in the time period is not known for sure. Two years, four years, or 5 years are uncertain when they will come back again.
            July 29, 2012. The day that cliff and his parents will leave London. Five hours before their departure, Cliff invites Clara to go for a while. Go to the park that not far from his home. In there, Clara can not control her emotion, she cried. Clara will be separated by Cliff’s family, Clara already consider them like family.
            "Clara, wait for me at this garden. Where we used to played together. Wait for me, I'll be back though, however I do not know when. "
            "I'll be faithful waiting for you, brother. Promise me, return to this garden as a doctor. "
            "Yes, I promise. I will come here as a doctor. "
            Standing among with a few people and waving her hand. Clara was really sad. They are really good and helped her mother, even up to their departure. Clara and her mother bought a house that simple enough to live.
            Day after day, Clara worked in a bakery shop that not far from where she lived. Her mom can not worked anymore. She only helped Clara to stay home.
            Adelai, July 30, 2021. A happy day between Cliff and Rere were exchanged rings. Three years for dating enough for them to get engaged. They seem to love each other. However, His deepest heart there is a sense for someone who had really loved it. A few weeks after their engagement, Cliff decided to go back to Bandung.
            London, August 20, 2021. On arrival he was in Lembang, the center focused on only one purpose, its find Clara. Cliff can not find Clara at home, Clara’s mom said that Clara had gone a few minutes ago and did not know where is she. Cliff was found Clara in her  workplace, the streets, but he can not find Clara. Cliff decided to go to a garden that have memories, where he was most of the day playing with Clara.
            6pm, at the Taman Bunga Cempaka. Cliff saw a woman who sitting under a lamp post and garden surrounded by red roses. A woman whose have wavy hair, with the blue shirt was busy playing with her red roses. Cliff was close to her.
            "Do you like rose too?
            "Heh. Yes. (With awkward) "
            "People who I loved, like this flower too, almost every week I always bring flowers for her"
            "Oh yes? Means she has good taste. "
            "Yeah, you're right. But .... "
            "But what?"
            "But, I'm afraid if I give these flowers to her, whether he was willing to accept my gift even though I had been engaged to another girl?
            "I bet you loved that girl who will receive the interest of giving you, even if you had been engaged to another girl. She sincerely loves this flower with all her hearts, she was not strong enough to resist a roses which she likes. "
            "Oh yes? Means I have to give these flowers to her. "(Pick a rose)
            …       
            "Here, take it."
            "Cliff? Oh really? Are you Cliff? "
            "Yeah Clara, I'm back. I have kept your promise. I came back as a doctor. And sorry, I have made you wait a long time. "
            "Yeah, it's okay. Almost every day I'm always here, waiting until sunset. Waiting for you. May be you will be back today. "
            "Clara, I want to be honest. Although I have been engaged to Rere, who has been dating for three years with me and honestly I do love her. However, I love to Rere not same as I love you. No other love feels like this, Ra."
            "Yes, thank you has been honest. Actually, I love you too. Although, different from you. I've never dated before. "
"I love you, Ra."

The end

Rabu, 08 Februari 2012

Spoof Text

Sorry I forget it !
In a little city, there lived a grand father named Josh and his wife named Clara. In this morning, they want to go to Kuta Beach together. They were packing for their holiday. Clothes, foods, medicines were prepared and no one they forget.

After they have breakfast, his wife was cleaning the kitchen and Josh out the car from garage. In the garage, he went to the car and want to open the door of car but he could not. He was forgot if the car was locked, He was finding the key on the table as usual he put. But, there was not the key. He was searching and searching that key. His pocket, suitcase and he around his house too but he could not find that key. 
His wife asked to Josh “Hay Josh, what are you finding for? Hurry up, please!”
“Wait a minute. I am finding the key. I have to concentrate to find it.” Said Josh
Josh was still finding that key. He was tired and sitted on the sofa. He was thinking where the key was. He was trying to remember what happened before he went to the garage.  Maybe, he forgot something.
“Oh Josh, actually what are you finding for? Asked Clara to Josh and came closer to him.
“Hem Clara, since 15 minutes ago I have found our car’s key but I did not found it.” Asked Josh
“The key? Hay, did you see it on your hand? It’s the key.”
“Oh God. I already hold it.  I’ m sorry Clara. You know me? I am too old and usually forget something. “



Text Analyzing :
Orientation   : Josh and Clara would go to the Kuta beach
Event 1  : Josh lost the car’s key 
Twist  : He realized that he has been held the key

The Shift Door

In a little village at a small hut, there lived a poor family. There were Mr and Mrs Albert. Mr Albert was a gardener and his wife just a housewife.
One day their lived completely changed. It started from, when Mr Joni was died and he had no family. So, in his inheritance he gave all of his riches to Mr Albert and his wife.
Then, Mr and Mrs Albert were moved in a big city and they bought a new house. Arrived their new house, Mr. Albert would  opened the door’s house. But, the door couldn’t opened. He trying and trying to opened it.
When they were almost hopeless, their neighbor, Mrs. Rahmi saw and came closer to them. 
“Excuse me. Can I help you?” Asked Ms Rahmi
“Yes. We can’t open the door. By the way, how to open it?” Said Mr Albert
“Oh wait. This door is not push, but you must shift it.” 
“Oh like that. Thank you very much.” Said Mrs Albert
Then they laughed with it, Mr Albert just didn’t know how to opened the door.

Text analyzing  
Orientation : Mr and Mrs Albert were a poor family
Event 1  : Mr Joni was died and gave all of his riches to Mr Albert and his wife
Event 2  : They were moved in a big city and bought a new house
Event 3  : They could not opened the door
Twist  : Actually, the door have to shifted

A Silly Girl
Jane was a renowned and leading trendsetter in the capital city. Her fans also followed her fashion. One day, Jane’s best friend, Dave would celebrate his birthday at a hotel and invited his friends and also a few colleagues of the entrepreneur. Jane became one of the honor guests that will be invited. She was so busy to finding the dress for attended Dave’s birthday party.
Then, Jane went to a famous boutique subscription. At the boutique, she saw a beautiful dress. But, that dress was the target of others who came first to the boutique. They were jostling to get that dress. Then, as expected the dress fell into Jane’s hand.
Few days later, Jane had prepared everything carefully. She dressed up for 3 hours to make it all perfect. At 7 pm, Jane arrived at the hotel using limousine. She got off from the car and her bodyguard opened the door for her. She walked along the beautiful red carpet gracefully. Suddenly, Jane saw a man which was so handsome and charming. The man gave her a smile. Jane was so enchanted by him.
Then Braakkkkkkkk! Her face hit an invisible glass door in front of her. So, she fell down with a supine position on the floor and her dress was torn. The accident brought her to tears and she was very shamed. She just realized that the man didn’t smile to her but a girl right next to her.

Text analyzing
Orientation   : Jane was a renowned and leading trendsetter in the capital.
Event 1  : Jane invited to attend Dave’s birthday
Event 2  : Jane went to a boutique to finding a beautiful dress
Event 3  : Jane was so enchanted because his smile
Twist   : Jane hit an invisible glass door and make her dress was torn